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- 1 回复 方方头
- 金宝: 时弊是任何时候即任何地点都有的，多数时候俺们都无法避免！跟贴和博文长度相当，呵呵
面对时弊，以及这些时弊的始作俑者，俺们只有两条路：1、逃避；2、面对；
逃避不用说，走为上，但
- 1 回复 Cristal
- tanghan: 文科女生，工科男生对你说：要是你能将妹妹带孩子当老师这几段儿和前面本是同根生的主题巧妙有机地结合成一个文章，俺就......俺就......服了you!好吧！
- 1 回复 redbud
- Cristal: a little!no. It makes a difference to the world. That makes all the differences.
- 1 回复 Cristal
- redbud: no. It makes a difference to the world. That makes all the differences.But it needs more people to work hard on it.
- 1 回复 redbud
- Cristal: But it needs more people to work hard on it.If you want to change the world, change yourself. If you start by yourself, all the needed resources will be drawn to you.
- 1 回复 Cristal
- redbud: If you want to change the world, change yourself. If you start by yourself, all the needed resources will be drawn to you.I respect you cause you are so positive ! If people are all thinking
like you, the world will be getting much better!
- 1 回复 tanghan
- 金宝: 文科老师就是要这么做的哦。好的文章不仅内容丰富，也要能砍才成。文科女生能写，浮想联翩。理科男生一般能文的不多，一旦成文比较注意言简意赅。本是同根生写得很好，只是我看有三四段儿和主题关联不紧密，似乎另写一篇”敬业的园丁“之类的比较好。
现在的背景交待，在后来的故事中应当有伏笔的。
不过，服就服了吧，这么好的小说，俺也服。