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- 1 回复 smartman
- well, this is a campus love novel. it helps if Yang could write a love letter to show their affection. obviously, it is not necessary if author chooses not to. that is why I suggest you write one to insert and supplement thus impress the author, eh?
- 1 回复 smartman
- well, you could take this great opportunity to learn how to write such a letter. you might find it useful in your future life once you have mastered such skill. who knows?
nnzzll: 呵呵
，遗憾的是我从来没有过这种感受啊。而且，我也从没有这种等信的经验。我那个时代起，大家都直接电话，视频聊天什么的了。
the advantage is, once you write (and paste here), the author can advise or improve your literature writing. where else can you find a novelist who is willing to do this for you for free?! readers like me will also be more than happy to read, comment and revise for you of course for free!
- 1 回复 smartman
- haha, in case the author is not willing to write but you could wear the author's shoes to write, you would impress the author and our readers, too. :-)
BL_518: 这要楼主来写，毕竟要符合当时的情景，文体、语言表述要相近～～～～
- 1 回复 BL_518
- 恐怕要让你失望了～～～～
smartman: haha, in case the author is not willing to write but you could wear the author's shoes to write, you would impress the author and our readers, too. :- ...
- 1 回复 海攀
- 很对。这一部着重于美国背景介绍，而不是他们的感情。俩人的事第一二部已经讲的够多了，这里再写就是过份了。后面还有很多内容，小说已经太长了。
nnzzll: 谢谢。
怎么说呢，不一定非要从YangXiaojing的立场上给ZhengWei写回信什么的，因为我感觉作者是想通过ZhengWei给国内的人写信的这道‘工序’，把初到美国的所见， ...
- 1 回复 nnzzll
- 谢谢你这么看的起我，可惜我现在抽不出时间来写这种文学性的东东。如果有一天我休长假了，也许我会挑战一下。
smartman: well, you could take this great opportunity to learn how to write such a letter. you might find it useful in your future life once you have mastered ...
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