好文共赏

作者:赌博客  于 2009-12-4 11:13 发表于 最热闹的华人社交网络--贝壳村

作者分类:好文共赏|通用分类:其它日志|已有5评论

今天看了刚上二年级的儿子的一篇作文,觉得不错,特摘入日志。为尊重作者,原文未做丝毫修改,我只负责抄写录入。原文如下,好文共赏:
 

Job’s Justin Wants to Have!

One day in a city called Inky town there was a 15 years old kid named Justin, he was a smart playful boy!

He wanted to do something interesting for his life and he decided to get a job. So he told his mother Jeawl and father Micheal and his little sister Star he was going to look for a job and so he did! He walked and walked he got to walmart he tried to get his job here but the manager said sorry you are to young to work here at Walmart..

As he walked home he saw a bus. He took the bus home. 5 years later after he was married to a jobless lady called Charm. That day he started looking for a jobs these are some. He got to see Soobeys, Markville mall, Shopers drug mart, Costco but he didn’t want any of these jobs. The next morning he went out of bed out of his house to find a job, of course he said good-bye to Charm in a loud voice, so Charm could hear. He went to his car to get to placed he might want to work at. He went off. The jobs he saw that was firing is starbucks coffee, Chapters, Angus glen, the museam, Garbage man, builder, fire fighters, library, school. He finally wants to have that’s being a copper and he got the job it was looking for so he got the job.

A few years later, they got kids. Justin was a really really really good copper and they lived happily ever after.


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2 回复 马大哈ann 2009-12-4 11:48
sf
2 回复 野木耳 2009-12-4 12:15
小二?好文共赏。
3 回复 oneweek 2009-12-19 12:02
3 回复 流水线 2009-12-26 12:59
好文
收藏啦
2 回复 秋收冬藏 2013-1-21 04:48
哈哈,令郎玩不玩sims? 那就是个生活的游戏。我曾迷过,直到发现用cheating code 也可以发财。
二年级的孩子能写这么大篇,后生可畏。

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