混在美国名校(45)---展翅高飞翔之这就是奇迹

作者:海攀  于 2011-3-30 22:22 发表于 最热闹的华人社交网络--贝壳村

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郑卫痛得“哎呀”叫了一声,使劲摔一下胳膊,却没能把小四甩开,只使得小四的双手捏得不那么重了。他哆哆嗦嗦去扯信口,一使劲,一下子把信封拦腰扯断。他抽出信纸,扫了一眼,只看到几个字:很高兴……包括学费和生活费,还有一串天文数字般的美元数码,随即他象是被电击中一般,发出一声惨叫,然后猛然把双手高高举到空中,扬着头,嘴对着屋顶,“啊啊”地发出极端狂喜的大叫。

 

小四的眼睛已经不能聚焦了,根本没有看清信上写的是什么,可是郑卫的反应明确地告诉他,他就要留北京了,他的全家都有救了,他这个农村孩子的命运,在这一眨眼间完全改变了。太爽了,太棒啦,比做梦都好的多,比上天堂更美妙!他一只手抓住郑卫的胳膊,另一只手举到空中,也象郑卫一样疯狂地大叫着。他们两个人狼也似的吼叫,震天动地,声势惊人。

 

屋内的兄弟们也全都明白过来,郑卫拿到全奖了,而且是王冠的,真是太奇怪太惊人太不可能了,都跳起来又叫又嚷,乱成一团。刘娟也是笑靥如花,鼓掌称庆。只有老七抢过郑卫的信仔细读起来,心里又是羡慕又是嫉妒,直后悔自己当初怎么就没敢报王冠大学,太胆小了,太没用了,郑卫这样的都能去,自己肯定没问题。他一点都不知道,郑卫费了多大的劲,使了多少手段,才拿到的这封信。

 

郑卫发泄地差不多了,从老七手上抢过信,撒腿往外跑。所有人都知道,他这是要去向女朋友报喜。跑过刘娟身边时,他停下来一把抓过刘娟的手握了一下,喊了声“谢谢”,又狂奔而去。刘娟笑着甩了甩被他握疼的手,对大家挥手告别。老七赶快跟上来说:“我送送你吧。”

 

要是以往,刘娟会说:“不用了。”她就是这样的人,保守而不解风情。可能今天心情好,也可能是老七沮丧的表情使她动了恻隐之心,这次她没有拒绝。下楼梯时,老七叹道:“真想不到,郑卫那样的,居然……居然……”刘娟理解地说:“他其实不差。”老七悲哀道:“可是运气更好呀!难道我比他差吗?唉,我怎么办呢?只有两个半奖。”刘娟安慰他说:“再等一下。”老七只剩两所学校没有消息了,心知希望不大,不由地摇摇头,叹了一口气,又摇了摇头,一副垂头丧气的样子。

 

出了楼门默默地走了一会,刘娟说:“不行就用这两个学校试一下吧。”老七说:“可是美国那么贵,怎么生活呀?”刘娟不看他,停了一下说:“我有钱,两个人够了。”老七明白她的意思,感动得眼泪汪汪。他突然抓过刘娟的手,低下头以迅雷不及掩耳之势亲了一口,吓得刘娟赶快抽手,还向四周望了望,幸亏没人注意他们。

 

老七的痛苦,已经变成了激动和幸福,还没来得及细细体验,刘娟就急忙叉开话题问:“小四今天是怎么了?”老七回了一下神,想起来也觉得不可思议:“是啊,挺怪的,他怎么也激动成那样?他平常挺沉稳的呀。郑卫跟他,也就一般吧。今天他是怎么了?”想一想又说:“快毕业了,大家好象都不一样了。”刘娟看了他一眼,不知道他所说的大家包不包括自己。

 

过了二天,刘娟也收到了王冠大学的全奖。几个月后,全班同学终于明白了,为什么郑卫出国,小四也会激动地发疯。

 

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1 回复 玉石 2011-3-30 23:33
美梦成真。
1 回复 BL_518 2011-3-31 00:49
功夫不负有心人~~~~~胆大的不一定被撑死~~~~~希望不要有什么破绽~~~~~~
0 回复 海攀 2011-3-31 05:51
混出去了:)
1 回复 海攀 2011-3-31 06:10
Hello, Smartman: 回复你昨天的贴子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed about Liu Juan.  Of course I understand Liu is not a main figure.  Xiao4 is also not a main figure.  To make Xiao4's behavious reasonable, the author did spare some space to outline his background.  However, the author did not give any background on Liu Juan.  So, I got a lot of questions on Liu Juan.  I did not ask for 比塑造平常人更多的细节支持. Rather, I only ask for minimal 细节支持 that could convince readers about Liu Juan.

Let me list a few queries briefly:
1.  I have never in my lifetime met a girl, who is beautiful, smart and diligent and constantly maintaining #1 in a best school either in China or US.  I can't believe in such a perfect figure.  How come she has been so motivated and studied so hard tirelessly?  What drove her all the years around?
2.  Why has Liu been so smart to always maintain #1 in a best school, even if she is a hard-worker?  How about her childhood, elementary, junior high and senior high school ages?
3.  How about her family background?  If Xiao4 can't afford US school application fee and Zheng can hardly afford (had not been for Yang's family help), how can Liu afford?
blah, blah, ...

In summary, I can't accept the existence of such a perfect figure, which is non-existent in real life, unless the author could render convincing details.

有的人天生聪明能干,你都不知道他/她的脑子是怎么长的。我年轻时碰到过一个校花,比刘娟更完美,到现在我也想不出她有什么缺点。我觉得她唯一的缺点就是---看不上我 :)

郑卫家不是出不起这笔钱,是杨小静家硬要掏。这不是编的,当时就是这样。可能是追求一种平衡吧,你家出人,我家出钱。以杨小静的子弟班背景,这种投资绝对赚。

谢谢看的这样细,想的那么深。
1 回复 smartman 2011-3-31 12:37
海攀: Hello, Smartman: 回复你昨天的贴子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed a ...
... "我年轻时碰到过一个校花,比刘娟更完美,到现在我也想不出她有什么缺点。"...

I didn't have such luck.  I can hardly imagine such a girl in the best college in China or US.  You can hardly find anyone consistently ranking #1 every year, not to mention a girl.  Anyway, that is your story and you are the author. :-)
2 回复 nnzzll 2011-3-31 21:17
海攀: Hello, Smartman: 回复你昨天的贴子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed a ...
你很老吗
6 回复 smartman 2011-3-31 21:36
nnzzll: 你很老吗
Nope, I don't think so.  The author should be Zheng Wei's age, fresh out of college in late 90s.  He could very likely be an early 80s or a late 70s. :-)
2 回复 nnzzll 2011-3-31 21:40
smartman: Nope, I don't think so.  The author should be Zheng Wei's age, fresh out of college in late 90s.  He could very likely be an early 80s or a late 70s.  ...
我觉得他最少late 70s。说不定是70-72年生人,现在38-40岁左右。
0 回复 smartman 2011-3-31 21:44
nope, i don't think he can be an early 70s.  his novel story does not seem to fit into college lives for an early 70s.
2 回复 海攀 2011-3-31 22:06
Thank you guys. Actually I am not Zheng Wei.

Author could be any age but the story is about late 90s to mid-00s.
1 回复 海攀 2011-3-31 22:11
smartman: ... "我年轻时碰到过一个校花,比刘娟更完美,到现在我也想不出她有什么缺点。"...

I didn't have such luck.  I can hardly imagine such a gir ...
She's learning Biology. For engineering or physics, mathematics, boys are better than girls.
4 回复 smartman 2011-3-31 22:15
海攀: Thank you guys. Actually I am not Zheng Wei.

Author could be any age but the story is about late 90s to mid-00s.
I never, ever thought you are Zheng Wei.  I just thought you were Zheng Wei's classmate or schoolmate.
1 回复 smartman 2011-3-31 22:19
海攀: She's learning Biology. For engineering or physics, mathematics, boys are better than girls.
Okay, I see the possible point.  Biology department has ~50% girls while engineering departments (typically CS or EE) has 10%-20% female in China's best school.  So, virtually in China's best school, girls can hardly sit constantly on number 1 seat in math/physics/engineering department.
1 回复 rongrongrong 2011-10-19 08:45
  

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