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Originally posted by 小草 at 2016-8-12 21:39:
韵脚不错,know / window, 要再好一点就考虑 masculine and feminine rhyme.
不错的建议:)
who will be the first to wake up?
I myself know it is me often,
In my hut I wake up with sleep enough,
outside the window is the belated sun.