转贴： [原创] 方教授的双语诗“题美女网友闻荷照” + 小草的译文+我的跟帖诗

楚天暑散莲叶开，淑女塘边自徘徊。问君哪得醉如许，为有清香荷里来。

As the sky of Chu is freed of the summer heat,
Fully grown are the lotus leaves.
A fair lady comes dressed nice and neat.
Lingering about, she cares not to leave.
How come, may I ask, my fair lady,
So enchanted you do seem to be?
Behold, this pretty petal of the lotus flower
With such a fragrance does capture me!

哈哈哈！ ：） 好诗，好译！ 喜欢！

这首诗是倒着做的，先有后两句，凑前两句，然后翻译。

 
好诗，妙译！赏学了！

 
Wow, amazing indeed very gifted...

丽人徘徊荷塘边，
娉娉袅袅好华年。
顾盼双眸剪秋水，
谁家淑女画中仙？

Thank you Little Grass!  Just modified it.

楚天暑散莲叶开，淑女塘边自徘徊。问君哪得醉如许，为有清香荷里来。

As the sky of Chu is freed of the summer heat,
Fully grown are the lotus leaves.
A fair lady comes dressed nice and neat.
Lingering about, she cares not to leave.
How come, may I ask, my fair lady,
So enchanted you do seem to be?
Behold, this pretty petal of the lotus flower
With such a fragrance does capture me!

哈哈哈！ ：） 好诗，好译！ 喜欢！

这首诗是倒着做的，先有后两句，凑前两句，然后翻译。

 
好诗，妙译！赏学了！

 
Wow, amazing indeed very gifted...

丽人徘徊荷塘边，
娉娉袅袅好华年。
顾盼双眸剪秋水，
谁家淑女画中仙？

Thank you Little Grass!  Just modified it.

借来的“剪秋水“

 
更妙了，赞一个！

 
Right now I am on the train, so I give it a try for fun as well

《荷塘淑女》－方壶斋

楚天暑散莲叶开，
淑女塘边自徘徊。
问君哪得醉如许，
为有清香荷里来。

A Quatrain By Fang Huzhai
(A Belle By Lotus Lake)

The sky of Chu cooleth down; the lotus flowers blow,
A belle by the lotus lake tarrieth to and fro.
Wherefore couldst thou be so besotted may I ask?
The fragrance hath seized my soul and willn't let it go.


Tr. Xiao Ciao

 
鲁拜体。好。




火车上译诗应该是很享受的事情。

 
呵呵呵，瞎鼓捣而已，请小曼同学不吝赐教！