本是同根生......(二十一)

作者:Cristal  于 2010-5-20 13:09 发表于 最热闹的华人社交网络--贝壳村

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2 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 02:34
xoyuanfen: 学校都没有净土。
国内近些年,教育界非常混乱,从幼儿园开始。每逢节日,老师直接找学生要礼物!老师还故意一堂课只讲60%,剩下的40%课外补习时讲(不是学校要求的补课,是自己开的小灶),补课挣的是课内的20倍甚至更多。
1 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 02:38
redbud: life is like that. We all have ups and downs. When I was down, I got supports from many positive people. So, why not pay it forward.
You are correct. I have learned from you! Thank you very much!
2 回复 redbud 2010-5-21 02:47
Cristal: You are correct. I have learned from you! Thank you very much!
You are welcome. Your writing is really good! Keep on writing.
1 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 02:54
redbud: You are welcome. Your writing is really good! Keep on writing.
Thank you for encouraging me to go on my writing. Sometimes, I want to give up.
1 回复 我是北极兔 2010-5-21 02:56
Cristal: Thank you for encouraging me to go on my writing. Sometimes, I want to give up.
To be successful, never give up!
1 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 02:58
我是北极兔: To be successful, never give up!
Ok. I'll continue.
1 回复 绿绿的地 2010-5-21 03:23
人权是非: 在机上打字选择错是常有的.
是啊!
1 回复 xoyuanfen 2010-5-21 03:36
Cristal: 国内近些年,教育界非常混乱,从幼儿园开始。每逢节日,老师直接找学生要礼物!老师还故意一堂课只讲60%,剩下的40%课外补习时讲(不是学校要求的补课,是自己开
我也听说了, 还找了个做老师的亲戚证实, 真是不幸啊。
2 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 03:42
xoyuanfen: 我也听说了, 还找了个做老师的亲戚证实, 真是不幸啊。
如果教育这块阵地都不再纯净,那这个社会还到哪去在一块净土?
1 回复 redbud 2010-5-21 03:50
Cristal: Thank you for encouraging me to go on my writing. Sometimes, I want to give up.
you are very talented! You have lived your life with your heart. That's really very important for a person. I admire your teaching capability. Hope I will teach my students in your style.
2 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 03:52
redbud: you are very talented! You have lived your life with your heart. That's really very important for a person. I admire your teaching capability. Hope I
My style is to teach by my  heart
1 回复 redbud 2010-5-21 04:07
Cristal: My style is to teach by my  heard
no. Teach by heart! that's the most important thing!
1 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 04:13
redbud: no. Teach by heart! that's the most important thing!
Yes, that is !
1 回复 TCM 2010-5-21 04:23
鲜花
1 回复 Cristal 2010-5-21 04:34
TCM: 鲜花
没拍砖!!!
1 回复 金宝 2010-5-21 06:56
方方头: 跟贴和博文长度相当,呵呵
谢谢提醒,不过俺没有喧宾夺主的意思。
2 回复 金宝 2010-5-21 06:58
方方头: 更长。单独发一篇吧
谢谢建议,不过俺觉得这应当让博主来决定,因为俺主要还是回应博主的话题。
1 回复 金宝 2010-5-21 06:59
Cristal: 好像你比谁都了解她!
因为你的故事已经很细腻地描述了圆圆的人品、个性,俺不过是归纳总结了一下。
2 回复 方方头 2010-5-21 07:01
金宝: 谢谢提醒,不过俺没有喧宾夺主的意思。
知道。我没那个意思
1 回复 金宝 2010-5-21 07:08
tanghan: 好的文章不仅内容丰富,也要能砍才成。文科女生能写,浮想联翩。理科男生一般能文的不多,一旦成文比较注意言简意赅。本是同根生写得很好,只是我看有三四段儿和
小说体的文章,应当与论文体有分别的,多个故事相串连,会增加整体故事的趣味性。同时,也让作者有更多机会来表达不同故事所带来的寓意。
比方讲,俺们前边仅仅读到方方怎样滋扰了圆圆的家庭生活,以及方方坚持离婚,但后边的交代就让俺们了解甚至理解了方方的行为方式。
俺觉着,这是很好的故事交待方式,如果本是同根生以平铺直叙的方式写成了一篇学术论文,那阅读性就该没那么好了。

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