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- 嗯，没法覆盖，只能另写。欢迎欢迎！
smartman: to everyone: anyone has time to rewrite and is interested in overriding this novel? if you are, please contact me. let us get prepared to override ...
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- 每个人都各有喜爱吧。你能来看一看就好。
紫星轩: 看到你在42节给我的留言。的确，只有读完整个故事，才能有较客观的评论。不过，读者一般不会拿来一本小说就读下去的，觉得不可读，就不读了。谢谢你在42节的评论 ...
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- 解释一下：郑卫的一千多块奖学金都拿来养家了。这二万多块是杨小静在餐馆打工挣得钱和后来做实验员存的钱。杨小静希望郑卫放她走，所以把钱全留给郑卫。而郑卫又很有男子气，觉得自己养家理所当然，你那个臭钱我不要......
生于70‘S: 从小静拿了郑卫一半钱开始，她所有的感动也好，愧疚也罢，都显得很虚伪。
有时候年轻人的想法跟咱们不一样。下面还有故事，会提到的。
- 2 回复 生于70‘S
- 这个不能接受，小静和郑卫在家庭责任上是平等的，不能是郑卫挣钱歌给两个人花，小静挣钱是自己的。小静对家庭的责任是怎么体现的？陪老公上床，做做饭，她把自己当成什么了，保姆加妓女。人和人看法相差太远。生活中，我很愿意把女人首先看作一个平等的人，而后才是女人，但是发现相当一部份女人并不是这样看自己，她们愿意别人把自己当成不必付责任的小孩来娇惯，而不是一个平等的成人。--这段有点扯远了，一点对男女平等的看法。
海攀: 解释一下：郑卫的一千多块奖学金都拿来养家了。这二万多块是杨小静在餐馆打工挣得钱和后来做实验员存的钱。杨小静希望郑卫放她走，所以把钱全留给郑卫。而郑卫又 ...
- 2 回复 生于70‘S
- 其实，在小静在餐馆打工和实验室博命的时候，我还是一直很尊重小静的-任何为了生活而努力奋斗的人都值得令人尊重，不管是穷跑堂的还是亿万富豪，他们在人格上没有高下之分。但是看到小静如此满足于一个花瓶的生活，叫人觉得没有人格魅力。或许这也是为什么刘娟拥有众多粉丝的原因
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- yang has been a "vase" for all her lifetime. her first months in the US has shown that. she was self-contented to stay at home and be supported by zheng's scholarship (RA).
生于70‘S: 其实，在小静在餐馆打工和实验室博命的时候，我还是一直很尊重小静的-任何为了生活而努力奋斗的人都值得令人尊重，不管是穷跑堂的还是亿万富豪，他们在人格上没有 ...
she went out to work not because she felt obliged but because she got bored and was really looking for something to kill her time. she worked hard at restaurant and lab because she was very greedy for money and very insecure about her job security. she had never appreciated her husband's consistent efforts for years -- finished courses, passed qualifyinf exams, published conference papers, etc. however, when she made less money than zheng, she could not complain too much on zheng's laziness.
once she got a job with higher salary than zheng, she became dissatisfied with zheng. after she got a better life/wealth opportunity (or prospect), she dumped zheng relentlessly.
liu juan is the ideal dream woman and wife most, if not all, men dream about. she is in the heaven with a variety of shining merits while yang is in the devil with countless disgusting evils.
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- 小静和巴特曼现在还在激情阶段。我想，巴特曼喜欢小静，有一个重要原因也是小静的不屈的奋斗，这种人格的魅力才是维持感情经久不变的基础，外在的东西的吸引是短暂的，不稳定的，小静这么快就放弃了奋斗而满足于花瓶的生活，也就放弃了自己的尊严--不过是一个热衷于物质和奢华的漂亮女人，她的那点外在魅力很快就会在巴特曼面前失色，巴特曼不是郑卫，他经历的这么多，不是一个花瓶就能满足他的感情需求的，而他这么忙，小静很快就会寂寞的，要是生了孩子，你就更知道什么叫中西文化差异，不看好他们的未来
- 2 回复 smartman
- thanks for generousity. you are open-minded to tolerate different opinions!
海攀: 嗯，没法覆盖，只能另写。欢迎欢迎！
i am seriously planning to rewrite only part of your novel. i am looking for collaborators who can and is willing to work with me together to: 1. type my chinese manusciprt into e-version (within around one day after i finish my writing); 2. comment or critize my writings subjectively; 3. be capable of writing some sections when i am busy and not available (ideally, he/she can write more than half sections while I will write the remaining one, but i can write more or almost all if i have to). we need to discuss about and agree upon the story outcome before each of us begins to write.
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- i am glad to find that you are beginning to gradually change your viewpoint on yang.
生于70‘S: 小静和巴特曼现在还在激情阶段。我想，巴特曼喜欢小静，有一个重要原因也是小静的不屈的奋斗，这种人格的魅力才是维持感情经久不变的基础，外在的东西的吸引是短 ...
$0.02:
"外在的东西的吸引是短暂的，不稳定的，小静这么快就放弃了奋斗而满足于花瓶的生活，也就放弃了自己的尊严"
i bet yang has always been a girl of Hao (like) Yi (relax) Er (hate) Lao (work). she happened, in a brief transient period in her life, to work hard to defend her job security, and kill time. her work attitude is 短暂的，不稳定的 while her insatiable devour for luxury, entertainment and laziness is constant and permanent.
- 2 回复 smartman
- maybe it is a good time now for us to review and recall our previous opinions. after i get some time later, i summarize more.
紫星轩: 看到你在42节给我的留言。的确，只有读完整个故事，才能有较客观的评论。不过，读者一般不会拿来一本小说就读下去的，觉得不可读，就不读了。谢谢你在42节的评论 ...
right now, in particular, i want to stress one point, after i read my previous postings a few montsh ago.
my major change in the past months (from March to July in reading LZ's novel) is my attitude towards yang.
in March, i found yang's character was so vivid and lovely. i liked this figure. i know liu juan is also a great girl. so, i asked LZ to write more and provide more details to make Liu more loveable. (LZ did not.)
somewhere after yang came to the US, i found she changed so quickly. so, i began to realize she was in nature actually a very vulger girl. she showed a flamboyant, lazy characters that are fond of Hao Yi Er Lao (like lazy hate hard work). plus, her attiude towards zheng made me feel more and more disgusting towards yang.
after yang did such an unforgivable crime to zheng, i began to look down upon her. i am completely angry at her evil deeds. i pray god will punish her!
what if god does not punish her? well, if god does not, i will try myself, using my pen to rewrite the novel. that seems my only feeble capability to carry out my will, which i believe is the justice.
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- yang 拼命工作有两个原因。1. job security 毕竟她认为这是个体面活。2. 从她拿到offer的那一刻，她已强烈觉出Bartman 喜欢她。她在做两手打算。 保住饭碗的同时取悦于Bartman。 而且还要做出良家妇女形象 （否则Bartman 不会娶她），步步诱惑， 欲拒还迎，直到Bartman 完全陷入其中，再给以最后一拒，彻底击毁Bartman的自信. 然后轻而易举擒到手。而且还速战速决，以防夜长梦多，毕竟窗纸已捅破，时间一长Bartman 很可能不想结婚了。如果这条路不通，她将还是跟着zheng. 此女非乃善物也。
生于70‘S: 小静和巴特曼现在还在激情阶段。我想，巴特曼喜欢小静，有一个重要原因也是小静的不屈的奋斗，这种人格的魅力才是维持感情经久不变的基础，外在的东西的吸引是短 ...
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- 小静想全留给他，郑卫为了表达气愤坚决不要。你大慨只能不接受郑卫的决定吧：）
生于70‘S: 这个不能接受，小静和郑卫在家庭责任上是平等的，不能是郑卫挣钱歌给两个人花，小静挣钱是自己的。小静对家庭的责任是怎么体现的？陪老公上床，做做饭，她把自己 ...
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- 再看一看才下结论吧。
生于70‘S: 其实，在小静在餐馆打工和实验室博命的时候，我还是一直很尊重小静的-任何为了生活而努力奋斗的人都值得令人尊重，不管是穷跑堂的还是亿万富豪，他们在人格上没有 ...
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- 她还是一个蛮勤快的人。这一点郑卫比她差得远。
smartman: yang has been a "vase" for all her lifetime. her first months in the US has shown that. she was self-contented to stay at home and be ...
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- 唔，还是说，下一周就知道了。
生于70‘S: 小静和巴特曼现在还在激情阶段。我想，巴特曼喜欢小静，有一个重要原因也是小静的不屈的奋斗，这种人格的魅力才是维持感情经久不变的基础，外在的东西的吸引是短 ...
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- 很浩大一个工程：）
smartman: thanks for generousity. you are open-minded to tolerate different opinions!
i am seriously planning to rewrite only part of your novel. i am lookin ...
合作并不容易，因为每个人对生活的看法都有差距。另外写作是非常花时间的，如果比较忙基本不可能。
望尽早读到你的大作！